WIP: Editing Just One Cup

Here is  a look at a cover that didn’t make the cut. Stay tuned for more updates each week, as well as NEXT week the cover reveal on April 30th!

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04/13 2.0% “Time to start gluing the pieces together. The formatting is set.”
04/15 page 32 16.0% “I’m wondering if I need to add more the Chapter 1 to even the pacing a bit. I’ll let my editor see it and then decide, for now I’m leaving it as is. Parting is such sweet sorrow seems a great quote for the end of chapter 2. “I heard the background noise of the airport as he listened to my breathing, then there was nothing.””
04/16 page 46 15.0% “Sometimes we dream of things that we’ve always wanted–of things that we have been searching for our whole lives without knowing it…and other times we wake up and know what we have to do. I have to write…so I do.”
04/17 page 46 15.0% “”Bruises fade, but the words…they continue to sting long after their mark has left…” Flipped the chapters around to make the flow better. Added some more transitional information.”
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3 thoughts on “WIP: Editing Just One Cup

  1. “I heard the background noise of the airport as he listened to my breathing, then there was nothing.”

    That’s one of those lines that when you say it, you know it’s right. It’s almost like it comes from outside of you, but it’s your unconscious and conscious minds working together to produce Art. In summation – I like that line!

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